Hello Everyone,
The following poem is one of my favourites. Created based on something I read as a child. I am linking it now to the Jingle Poetry At the Gooseberry Garden's Poetry Picnic week 25. Don't forget to enjoy the same.
Blessed indeed, the humans are, with a beautiful nature
The following poem is one of my favourites. Created based on something I read as a child. I am linking it now to the Jingle Poetry At the Gooseberry Garden's Poetry Picnic week 25. Don't forget to enjoy the same.
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Blessed indeed, the humans are, with a beautiful nature
but, still, weep & beg we shall, for the want of love.
Proved it is, in every deed, that human nature
must be ashamed, because we cant any-more love.
Depends, the fate of humanity, on each of us
as, spreading is the venom of terrorism, by the day.
Dying are the innocents, for no fault of theirs
and hanging is our future, ah On the corrupt politicians of the day.
Changing, is the world, into fire of hell
waiting are a few, to free us from blindness.
By ringing aloud the awakening bell,
to eliminate, from depths of human heart, the darkness.
Chanting that, “affection of man” to other
if killed among streets & on roads, we’ll
surely fall apart not, only, at the border
& in peace we shall never dwell.
Nothing it costs to grab humanity with ease
than a 70 mm smile that wipes away your loss
& to change this world of terror to peace
To prove that world looks the way, the society makes.
with warm regards
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awesome thoughts on life.
ReplyDeletewell done.
Happy Rally.
I agree with the sentiments you put forth and you have presented them quite poetically. Well done!
ReplyDeleteWell put together. Enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteBlessings
Quite a thought-provoking piece on life.
ReplyDelete@Andy, @Marbles in Pocket, @Bethe77 & @Jingle!!
ReplyDeletethanks a million for your kind words!!! Bless you all for the same!!!
true words written through great insight... brilliant... :)
ReplyDeletevery few people think this way..awesome thoughts and well put up.
ReplyDelete"Dying are the innocents, for no fault of theirs
ReplyDeleteand hanging is our future, ah On the corrupt politicians of the day." <--Like the pun on hanging. :)
Wow !!! Amazing piece of art ")
ReplyDeleteThis is incredible, powerful, thought-provoking, heart-breaking. Love the gritty realism
ReplyDeleteYes, all it takes is a smile and ease and good energy. Your poem evokes this in the midst of negativity. Beautiful!
ReplyDeletethis was interesting, like a chant about changes :)
ReplyDeletehappy gooseberry day!
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amazing tribe, a thrill to see you share.
ReplyDeletekeep it up.
Beautiful thoughts on life.Love it :)
ReplyDeletelovely..
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing.
Very good AA, some excellent verbiage and sentiments mixed poetically.
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