Hello Everyone,
The world of writing is marvelous. Due to hell lot of writing contents, writing prompts and challenges.
On tops of waves
walking on and on
The world of writing is marvelous. Due to hell lot of writing contents, writing prompts and challenges.
This post is in response to "Sensational Haiku Wednesday" hosted by JENN on her website. The concept is very simple. Jenn puts up a theme for a week on her blog. We are all supposed to create Haiku based on the theme.
This week's theme is freestyle. That is to post anything I like. Here is my attempt at Haiku.
--x--
On tops of wavesthere goes down, sun of the oceans
trying to paint highlights
an OUT OF ORDER
hangs low, on this evening
hangs low, on this evening
at the soda fountain
walking on and onin her company, I too feel
the sea, this evening
--x--
Well, How was that?? Better than my previous one??
with warm regards
AllMyPosts
7 comments:
Neat! I like the idea of building a poem out of separate haikus.
I like it the picture goes well with it as well. Good job.
I make no claims to being a poet and certainly would never want to try my hand at haiku. I applaud your efforts.
Thank you for your comment on my blog today.
Great job!!
When I started, I was referred to a syllable counter. For help with counting syllables, try:
http://www.russellmcveigh.info/ajax-syllable-counter
Traditionally most use 5-7-5, however, I have read 17 syllables, total is accepted!
Keep trying ~~ :D
Ha!!
I too have a hell lot of trouble with syllables and all such!! I am scanning through all haiku online .. to construct these haiku-es
These were awesome and to heck with syllables. It's the rhythm that matters.
I loved all of your poems. the first one is magnificent and your second about the out of order sign brought a smile to my face. what an awesome observation.
JM
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