Thursday, April 28, 2011

Sensational Haiku Wednesday

Hello Everyone,
    The world of writing is marvelous. Due to hell lot of writing contents, writing prompts and challenges. 

     This post is in response to "Sensational Haiku Wednesday" hosted by JENN on her website. The concept is very simple. Jenn puts up a theme for a week on her blog. We are all supposed to create Haiku based on the theme.
 
      This week's theme is freestyle. That is to post anything I like.  Here is my attempt at Haiku.

--x--
On tops of waves
there goes down, sun of the oceans
trying to paint highlights


an OUT OF ORDER
hangs low, on this evening
at the soda fountain

walking on and on
in her company, I too feel
the sea, this evening
--x--
  

Well, How was that?? Better than my previous one??
 
with warm regards

AllMyPosts

7 comments:

Deniz Bevan said...

Neat! I like the idea of building a poem out of separate haikus.

Josh Hoyt said...

I like it the picture goes well with it as well. Good job.

Sharon - Grandma is a Writer said...

I make no claims to being a poet and certainly would never want to try my hand at haiku. I applaud your efforts.

Thank you for your comment on my blog today.

TortugaRachel said...

Great job!!

beccagivens said...

When I started, I was referred to a syllable counter. For help with counting syllables, try:
http://www.russellmcveigh.info/ajax-syllable-counter

Traditionally most use 5-7-5, however, I have read 17 syllables, total is accepted!

Keep trying ~~ :D

AllMyPosts said...

Ha!!

I too have a hell lot of trouble with syllables and all such!! I am scanning through all haiku online .. to construct these haiku-es

Jillien said...

These were awesome and to heck with syllables. It's the rhythm that matters.

I loved all of your poems. the first one is magnificent and your second about the out of order sign brought a smile to my face. what an awesome observation.

JM

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