Sunday, April 17, 2011

Can't Be Explained

Hello Everyone,

This post is for the Poets United's Thursday Think Tank #44. We are supposed to write a poem on something viz our first experience at something, like first date, first kiss, ... 


I am gonna post my first poem for this concept here:


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Can’t be explained to every Tom, Dick & Harry
What the need is of a girl friend
the source of man’s pride & what the hurry
is in finding a lawyer, even as a child.

Can’t be explained, can’t be explained
why in my hurry, to become an adult
why can’t I cherish childhood as a child
thus why do I, stones at myself pelt

Can’t be explained to every Tom, Dick & Harry
why does a man know, funny it is to lose health
in a hurry to earn, remind him not, how funny
that to restore his health, lost, is his wealth.

Can’t be explained, can’t be explained
how wonderful, the love towards mother land is
& the reason for supreme sacrifices, can’t be explained
why at borders, does the love stop, built with own hands of theirs.
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I dunno, if this is apt for the theme of the week, but I just enjoyed searching for this poem and posting it here. Hope you love it too, just let me know, how you feel about it!!


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4 comments:

Mercy said...

This is a very interesting poem. It makes one think. Nice work!

Author Joshua Hoyt said...

I like the ending about the borders. It is so strange how borders change our hearts. How the love ends, very sad. Good poem and thought provoking.

Ella said...

I like the idea of it can't be explained, makes one ponder~

madhumakhi said...

"why does a man know, funny it is to lose health
in a hurry to earn, remind him not, how funny
that to restore his health, lost, is his wealth."
Exactly what my mother tells me.
I agree with Ella.
Nice poem.

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